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kaizoku ([personal profile] kaizoku) wrote2009-01-19 11:05 am

beta plz?

Anyone up for betaing poetry? I wrote a -- quintina, I guess you could call it. Five 5-line stanzas with reordered line endings. Merlin fandom, Gwen/Morgana. I'm not sure if it works... I also have a short prose piece (430 words, Gwen-centric) that could use a second opinion.

[identity profile] allyndra.livejournal.com 2009-01-20 08:12 am (UTC)(link)
I have experience critiquing poetry, so I can beta for form, word choice, imagery, etc. I've only seen a little of Merlin and read a small amount of fic for it, so I couldn't beta for characterization or canon, though.

Ditto for the prose, I can beta for errors and general writing quality, but not so much for the specific fandom.

If you want me to take a look, you can send them to allyndra at hotmail dot com.

[identity profile] kaizoku.livejournal.com 2009-01-20 02:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Sweet! Thank you. I'll send them to you.
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[personal profile] briar_pipe 2009-01-21 03:03 am (UTC)(link)
If you need a second beta and don't mind waiting until tomorrow night, I can help. (Warning: my only exposure to Merlin has been through fic, so I can't guarantee characterization help.)

[identity profile] kaizoku.livejournal.com 2009-01-25 10:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, hon! I was going to ask you to look at it, but now I just want to get it posted RIGHT NOW. Ahhh! *facepalm*